Help needed

[Yorkshire Pudding]

Been constructing a letter to my MP . Which is to follow , any hints , criticism , will be glady received .

 

Dear Ms Yvette Cooper,

 

I'm glad to see your party have finally managed to get the hunting bill passed through to the house of Lords again . No doubt the House of Lords will pass it back through the hallowed halls and your party will invoke the Parliament Act to force the bill onto the statute book .

Being a constituent in your area and reading the local press (your mouth piece) . I trust that anybody found using dogs to hunt , when the law is passed, will be able to contact you for your help if they are fined over £120 .

I have used the £120 sum in reference to the hunting with dogs, as this seems to be the average amount of money people are fined for driving without tax ,insurance , MOT or even driving licence within your constituency .

The law that you will pass in my mind is unjust, and unenforceable but i trust the police will give it their full attention and put lots of resources and money into it's enforcement .

I just hope that when the police are busy chasing people who are hunting with dogs , nobody is breaking into my car/house , murdering , raping , or abusing anybody within your constituency .

 

YIS (Yours In Sport) jim

[jimdfish]

She will know its not me. My grammar,spelling and punctuation is much better.

Jim

[lurcherboy]

You need a swot to re-write it YP, no offence mate, get Hammer as he is up on punc and all that ****.

 

Yours is polite you should see the one I sent Roger Gale (moron) MP

 

 

 

 

LB